7:23 am

i'm bored.

says it all in the title.

 me

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8:22 am

re...

GOOD MORNING VETNAMN!!!!

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4:42 pm

an inproved poem

The Wood

wind blowing through the trees,

twigs snapping under leaves.

birds chirp and sing and dance,

while little field mice scurry and prance.

a stream trickles beside a path,

deer jump in and take a bath.

light shines in from the scorching sun,

new born foxes set off and run.

these are the things I long to hear,

in the wood this time of year.

this poem was redone to go into a statewide contest, so PLEASE read it and give me feedback on how to make it better.

-Sailor Takako

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7:55 am

here is apoem i wrote!!!hope u like!

THE WOOD

WIND BLOWING THROUGH THE TREES,

TWIGS SNAPING UNDER LEAVES,

BIRDS CHIP AND SING AND DANCE,

WHILE LITTLE FEILD MICE SCURY AND PRANCE,

THESE ARE THE SOUNDS EVERYONE HEARS,

IN THE WOOD,

EVERY YEAR.

 

  DID U LIKE IT?  I'M NOT SO SURE THAT I DID A VERY GOOD JOB, BUT IF U DID LIKE IT, PM ME OR E'MAIL ME AT ritsusohma114@wmconnect.com

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4:49 pm

I WON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TODAY AT THE END OF P.E., WE GOT OUT THE BASKETBALL AND WHOEVER DIDN'T MAKE IT HAD TO LINE UP TO LEAVE, WELL ANYWAY, IT GOT DOWN TO ME AND THIS GUY NAMED MICHAEL AND HE MISSED IT SO I WENT AND MISSED IT, THEN HE WENT AND MISSED IT, THEN HE WENT AND MISSED IT THEN I WENT AND MADE IT!!!  I WWWWWWWWOOOONNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!  IN ALL MY 7 YEARS AT THAT SCHOOL I HAVE NEVER WON A SHOOT OFF, BUT NOW I PROUDLY HOLD THE TITLE OF, WELL, I DON'T KNOW WHAT TITLE I PROUDLY HOLD BUT I HOLD SOME TITLE!( I LOOKED LIKE THIS WHEN I WON: )

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